Questa short nasce come ampliamento

Questa short nasce come ampliamento di una scena presente nella FF "My fair lady" nel capitolo 18 ma può comunque essere letta separata e da chiunque. E' un esperimento, poiché è la prima volta che mi cimento nel narrare un tema così personale e intimo. Inoltre ho scelto una forma espositiva molto particolare e non so se questo porterà beneficio o meno alla narrazione. Non siate timide e ditemi, anche via messaggi privati, senza necessità di commenti pubblici, cosa ne pensate e dove posso migliorare.

Per necessità di fluidità, ho riportato in questa short i primi paragrafi con cui iniziava la storia presenti nelc apitolo 18.

Grazie e buona lettura!

Hasil (Inggris) 1:

This short was created as an extension of a scene present in FF "My fair lady" in chapter 18 but can still be accessed separately and by anyone. It's an experiment, because it is the first time I utter a theme in the pursuit so personal and intimate. I also chose a very special exhibition form and I don't know if this will bring benefit to the narrative. Don't be shy and tell me, also via private messages without the need of public comments, what you think and where I can improve.Necessity of fluency, I featured in this short the first paragraphs with which began the history present in chapter 18.Thanks and happy reading!

Hasil (Inggris) 3:

This short was born as an enlargement of a scene in FF "My fair lady" in chapter 18 but can still be read separately and by anyone. It is an experiment, because it is the first time i del Cimento in narrate a theme so personal and intimate. In addition, I have chosen a form of explanation very particular and i don't know if this will benefit or less to the narrative. Don't be shy and tell me,Also via private messages, without the need for public comments, what you think and where i can improve.

For need of fluidity, i reported in this short the first paragraphs with which began the story present nelc assurances regarding compliance 18.

Thank you and good reading!